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Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
A quick reflection? No, it almost seemed as if I were constrained, rushed, chased by the demand of this post. We have all the time, here we have time like ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Battle of the Sexes (Please read the rules)
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Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: (mostly) Serious Reviews for (mostly) Serious People
Hello Mr. or Ms. Diskelemental. I would like to request a review for 2 of my reflections. I do think a serious reviewer is hard to come by, and your ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Love and fifty dollars
May I sit besides you? He paused. She nodded. He handed her an envelope. She gently placed it in her bag. May I have your hand? Please, your hand. He ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ch 1: A Red Rose Among The Others
Ms. Julie, I have read chapter 1 as recommended. In all honesty I hold very little appreciation for romance and the like; nonetheless, this is a novel written by none ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Room
Ahh... it seemed I've erred in just so many ways. I ask of all of you to forgive me of my brutish impudence that have inspired many sighs and disappointments. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Triad
Dear Ms. Butterfinger, First and foremost, I thank you dearly for reading my work. I must confess, it does my poor soul a great deal of good that others are ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Room
Oh dear, what fine criticism! My heart is simply broken to pieces! You've undone me! Now, what am I to do for my poor writing? Shall I run to its ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: At The Tongue of The Critic
How longing and desperate! No, no perhaps it is more determined and fatalistic? No, no I do not know what it is, but only what I feel is certain! How ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Room
A distant drip drip drip of a liquid from up high to down low, crashing with spectacular force on to the concrete floor. A flicker of light on and off, ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Death is liken to an enamoured rose
I could not help but feel rather giddy reading this. Are you by chance a fan of Oscar Wilde's plays? I could not help but feel traces and echoes of ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Words
I apologize for my deficiencies. Naturally, I am unfit to critique anything in an apt manner or air. Nonetheless, I take great pride in who I am (for what else ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Heliotropes
Pardon me, but I'm not too keen on rhetoric and grammar. I do not know much concerning poetry or the sorts. Words, on the other hand, I appreciate. I had ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: I Undress
I enjoyed the poem. Thank you. In all honesty, I know not much else to say.
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Summer and Winter
A short poem about someone, I can't help but wonder who she is... (naturally, i've never seen the show.) A nice simple poem, thank you for the post. Simple metaphors ...
Jul 29, 2011
