jayflames1

I really like your title and the "you can try shoving an orange into an apple" part. The piece in general seems kinda dramatic. Especially with your ending of "die". ...

I dislike the first part, im sorry, but why is the sky red? The sky is almost never red except at sunsets, but then the clouds wouldn't be "dancing" because ...

I like how you managed to make this so short. However. Dead trees aren't normally silent. They would creak from their own weight as they deteriorate. Bugs might eat it ...

OK, so.... I feel that you should change the first word to "A" instead of "The". You could change "A fresh feeling of frost" to "A feeling of fresh frost" ...