jasmine12

Hi. So we all know that Mary is a young teenager-that should be obvious-but what else? Maybe when she first see's Trey you can kind of describe him more...not like ...

okay, i read this earlier today and i couldnt think of anything to say to make it better. You decribed the feelings and his anxiety for that letter so well. ...

I have to say this is a really well written poem. I dont understand how this verse or phrase, what ever u want to call it, connects with the rest ...