janey

Oh wow, it's really, really good. I love the shading that you've done... it's so subtle but it definitely brings the picture to life and makes it 3-dimensional.

Oh wow... it's really good even if it wasn't a freehand, from your imagination drawing.

Other than the spelling/grammer issues that someone else already pointed out, I like it in general. No one can remember Who I am Or that I exsist at all This ...

I like the choruses, but I'm not entirely sure where you're going. Are you saying that you want to repay someone but you can't or that you don't want to ...

I think that the lyrics would make a good song... I'm not so sure about the number of the times you repeat "We're just like you" but otherwise... I don't ...

This is my first time doing it and I'm kind of excited. I'm also hoping that I'll have enough time to finish my novel, what with work and all that ...

I used to. Now I don't so I just write on any piece of scrap paper. As a result, my binder of lyrics is a collection of backs of envelopes, ...

I started writing stories when I was 6-7 because it was fun to write and it entertained me. I then moved over into poetry because it was more about expressing ...

I tend to be more of a "if it isn't working, leave it alone" kind of person. If I'm forcing it, stuff doesn't come out the way I want it ...

The song is at . It's called "Anymore". I'm not really a vocalist... I write songs and play guitar/bass/piano... Seems like yesterday When it all fell apart Seems like my ...

The song is at . It's called "Without You". I want you back the way you were So strong and proud of who you were I'll remember you the way ...

It's wayy too cold in Ontario right now. Chick-lit novels... sophie kinsella/margaret wiseman, alisa valdes-rodriguez, jennifer weisner, shanna swendson, katie fforde... that kinda thing. Kind of in b

It was really good... I couldn't stop reading, and I tend to lose interest in stories if they don't pull be in quickly (ie. the first 2 paragraphs). I thought ...

I loved the first 2 verses and the first line of the last verse. I agree though, I'm not certain if the focus of the poem was the pebbles... or ...

There were some lines in this that I liked, but for me, a lot of it just didn't make me feel the poem. My favourite part is probably the following: ...