janey

mp3 is at if you're interested in hearing the music with it... yes, it's midi and yes, i'm aware that i can't sing... which would be why i play guitar ...

Alright, so I rewrote this song... there's music to it now although I think I might have to rewrite the music because I don't like the flow. Anyway, I think ...

October Girl - thanks for the review! Some of the lines are the way they are because of how the music this song was originally written for flowed... I had ...

I guess I should explain the concept first. It's about addiction... something that's within you and that controls you - shortening your lifespan and stealing your years without you even ...

Hey, There were parts that I liked, but I found the whole thing pretty repetitive. For example, when you wrote: Driving on the fast lane, through the hill side, to ...

I kind of like what you've got... the first verse and the chorus flow. Like October Girl said though... I'd reword the second verse to give it a little more ...

I like the idea that you've started with - I like that you've got a story behind it. You've got a basic song down. Now, I'd work with rewording the ...

Hey Kalliope, Thanks for the review! I admit that the lyrics don't really have a direction - my lyrics aren't typically like this. I think I kind of started with ...

Oh wow... wow. I'm very impressed... I love looking at the art/photography section because there's some really amazing stuff in here and this is definitely one of those times. I ...

I like the emotion that you're getting across. I like the use of repetition although it seems more like a song this way (that "Just because he's not here..." paragraph ...

Bridge: The last whisper from a child’s lips As fancies drift from fingertips He loves me, he loves me not This is definitely my favourite part. I really liked the ...

Dear you You're a part of me You're eating away at All the things that I am You're in my veins Taking me down Tearing at my heart Another tragedy ...

I know this deperation slipping in your eyes Saw you on the otherside I'm outside looking in (chorus) One less reason to keep holding on Leave you in your misery ...

Thanks for the comments - I'm glad that you like the songs! Yeah - the vocals on Anymore were done after I did the ones for Without You, so they're ...

Thanks for the comments - I really appreciate them. I know I'm not a vocalist :oops: I just record at home for fun - and to capture what I want ...