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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Colorado with My Best Heart

    Review: I loved the imagery in this story. I could picture it really well and the words flowed. It's very creative, although some lines didn't seem to fit well. I ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Everything

    Review: I really liked this poem! I think that it's very expressive and it flows really well. It reflects a good poem and I enjoyed reading it. This poem would ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I Think That I'm Falling Again

    Review: I like it overall so far. But, I think that you should add more detail. Everything went by really fast and I think that if you give it more ...

    Oct 10, 2009


the day belongs to expectations but the night belongs to me
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