jammiebrookes

Thank you for your review on my piece! I've also rectified some of the other errors which were apparent and you outlined and the revised edition is now above, if ...

Thanks very much for all the comments guys! I've amended the errors that you've pointed out and they really do help make the description flow a lot smoother. I'm glad ...

When man is nervous, he does stupid things. He forget his morals; he forgets his fellow man. He fights. He kills. ------------------------------------- The chilling wind slowly wrapped around the step

Sunset or sunrise?... The perfect ending or the new beginning? Everyone has a different vision of what's beautiful; for some it's a hot bath after a long day at work, ...

Hello to all the YWS Writers and Reviewers, My name's Jamie and I'm writing to you from the UK. I'm new to the site and I'm looking forward to sharing ...