jamgalloway

Julia and Logan are twin sisters, hahaha. Julia is actually more the main character than Logan, but I change POV's quite a bit. There's only one or two characters in ...

Well, that's cool, I guess now you just have some advice for if you do decide to try writing for the public. And I used to think the same way ...

Ahh. Well, it's a good one. I love horror stories, and short ones like this can sometimes hit chords that novels and longer stories can't.

Hey, I'm not accusing you of anything, but I've read this *exact* same story on another site. Like, word for word. I can't remember what site it was, maybe Reddit, ...

Haha, understandable

Yeah, I've thought and rethought about her no longer being disabled many times for that very reason, but in the end I've decided to go through with it. The rest ...

Hahaha, that would be hilariously tragic if their mom had a heart attack and died. Like, she survived the car wreck, but is so shocked by Julia she still dies. ...

Oh, good! I'm glad that it works. And I know I've been pretty slow on posting stuff lately, I've had basically no free time between my job and volleyball. But ...

For real. I don't see any reason not to.

I totally agree. There are good officers, but at the same time those officers are defending the actions of the bad ones when it's clear at this point that there ...

Oh, really? I always find it odd when a place prohibits language like that, but that's up to them. Thanks for telling me, I had no idea how any of ...

Yes. I mean, putting action between dialogue like this: "We don't think we can do this anymore," the Fairly OddParents said. Cosmo stayed hovering behind Wanda, but still talked at ...

Haha, you sounded so disappointed in the first line. And this made me laugh: "Marcus must care for Holland somewhat, or he wouldn't care." I got what you meant though, ...

And I forgot to mention I have the next three (they're really short) chapters up!

Haha, I will neither confirm nor deny your theory