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it's about a man who loses a tooth and gets a gold one to replace it. Should i make this clearer? i thought it was easily understood, but then again ...

thanks for the reviews

Thanks for the review lena. I think on the language we came up with some anglo-american language problems. Rooted means to dig around. Alright is one word. throwing a strop ...

hello lena. Skipping narrative in favour of just reading dialogue and action seems to me an immature way of approaching literature, however I'm new to this and understand that more ...