Young Writers Society

I really like how this story turned out, with the good endings and all. I like the FNAF-like concept that their ghosts can only be freed with closure and the ...

Damn...Honestly, this kinda feels like a fever dream to me. I feel like this story kinda took the concept of Tantalus from Greek mythology and sprinkled some angst and real-world ...

All I really have to say is...Holy hell, this was one hell of a fun story to read. I love carnival-type fantasy stuff, so this kinda holds a special place ...

Eh...This is a pretty interesting concept to say the least. I guess the concept of hostage POV is not really that new, but we're talking about CHILDREN here. I guess ...

I kinda like the concept but I don’t really understand the ending. Anyway, I like the idea of the idea of a guy having voices berating him, it’s a nice ...

I kinda like this, but this has potential to be a good series prologue. I love the way you mixed in ancient elements with modern elements to create this banger. ...

It’s good, with the earlier paragraphs being the calm before the storm. The only thing is that the story is a little short and boring, but other than that you ...

This is actually good lmao, you depicted like ptsd or something, I don’t know why this has more reviews. I would genuinely look at more of this. Although I would ...

Very interesting story so far. Good plot potential. It is kinda boring, so ya should probably add more action to the story. But good on ya for doing the setting ...

This looks like this has lots of potential. I like how the girl is being used as an advertising tool. Embracing capitalism, yes. It also opens the way for more ...