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Re: PENDLETON (First draft) - Chapter 3: Targets
Thank you so much! Will do!
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 4
Hmm, very nice. Oof, I don't know how the site works tho XD.
Nov 19, 2020 -
Re: PENDLETON (First draft) - Chapter 1: Animals
Thank you! I appreciate your breaking down of issues in my style that make it clunky and harder to read. I have a hard time pinning down WHAT it is ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: PENDLETON (First draft) - Chapter 1: Animals
Thanks for taking a look! Yeah I can see that there's some flow and description issues. Thanks for letting me know what works/doesn't work as a reader. That's always very ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: PENDLETON (First draft) - Chapter 1: Animals
Thanks!
Jul 11, 2020
