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  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Mongolian Terror

    Thanks for the feedback. It was very helpful

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Mongolian Terror

    Thanks for the feedback. It was very helpful

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Mongolian Terror

    Thanks for the feedback. It was very helpful

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Mongolian Terror

    Thanks for the feedback. It was very helpful

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Technology, Historical Fiction Re: 滴答

    Very interesting Chinese inventors story. Lots of historical content and I liked that you put the markings over letters (ex: Fēng Mă). I like that there was a cliffhanger,it makes ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Secret Pages

    I thought your story was suspenseful and thrilling. Very well written and it would surely scare anyone who reads it of cheating. I liked how you weaved in plenty of ...

    Mar 15, 2016


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