jackolantern

I think your peice has a story line that could be really interesting, and poignant. but your peice seems kind of rushed. in the first paragraph, "it weren’t for Claire’s ...

I really liked your peice, and i hope that you feel better soon! The ending, with the blurs and the back of the mind was my favorite part, even though ...

And the world which began it was nothing close to the world that ended it. It was a world bathed in blood, and sorrow. Maya and Paul looked out the ...

What was your inspiration to write this peice? it is very realistic, and very sad. It has a wonderful sense of closure at the end which alot of stories, especially ...

In the beginning, We were dragged from the depths of the ocean, And pulled out into the impossibly bright Light of the world. And as this creature, This noble ancestor ...

thanks so much! this is my first poem on here, and i am so glad to get some constructive comments! your reveiw was extremely helpful! :)

this is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read! you should never ever ever stop writing! no matter how long our wrinkled hands stretched towards them and ...

I really enjoyed your peice. it is complicated, but not overcomplicated, which really complimented your theme. however, i couldn't help noticing that she is really really hard on this guy. ...

i liked this poem, but i was a little confused too. i think that its fine not to be direct with poetry because part of the art of it is ...

it was night and trees were spiders as the glistening fog began, and the dew caught fast our clothing, and we cried out as we ran. and the monster fast ...

I really like the tone of your poem...its haunting. Your imagery is also really great! I think it would be even better if you changed some of your line's sentence ...

I really really liked it! the only thing I would say, is that there are some places where you add extra s's, which disturbs the flow of your writing. Also ...