jackolantern

Name- Xander XY Gender-male age-18 Gang-Maniac, possibly citizen, (please see history) Appearence-dark black hair down to his waist. He has brown eyes and scars all over his face, from fights ...

Lucile Barns Alone because I have multiple personalities-six to be exact. What do you have to do to achieve eternal damnation?

Hi! I'm an old member, but I took a break...for like two years... anyway, I just got back on and I'm interested in posting part of a novel. Are there ...

Time is completely relative. organisms live and die, but space does not. space goes on forever and it has always been. time is something organisms created to explain why they ...

thanks so much for all the feedback! i'm going through and editing this evening! just so everyone knows, the line "poem as lovely as a tree comes from another poem, ...

this is beautiful and horrific at the same time. You're imagery reminds me of an explosion, escpecially the section about peices of the subject being draped over plastic hangers. The ...

To fear hippo's which are half wolf man, thats the monster part, while sitting in a locked safe with a morter board on your left hand and pushing lawnmowers with ...

I really liked your peice-especially the transformation from happy wonderland to 'fiery hell'. it was very unexpected. Howevery, your writing loses its voice on the last line. is there any ...

keep them close, was his advice, you don't know how painful such a vice can be when cutting into one's soul. keep them close and wander not all hells lose ...

depends. some people are so thick and superficial that you aren't going to reach them no matter what the quality of your writing is. (which i'm sure is excellent) sometimes ...

very well written, but a bit confusing. your meatphore with the color blue and the rain, " blue is a lovely color, and the rain is a wonderful freind" is ...

I hope that I shall never see, that "poem as lovely as a tree", for if it were, and if did I, I should fall upon my knees and cry. ...

This is a beautiful peice. the beggining was a little confusing, but it becomes clearer and cleare as you go along. i loved the ending. It seemed appropriate that only ...

Name: Lilah Malsberg Age: 14 1/2 (13-17) Gender:female Appearance: short brown curly hair, with one blonde streak in it. she had a pigment disorder that keeps her eyes from having ...

I love this poem! its fantastic. I really like the way you have written it without a definite format, more like it was a casual convesation or a flow of ...