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Re: A Timeless Masquerade
hi i really liked this but... Let's get amnesia. i think you could get rid of that fullstop And go back in time To where ballroom dances Filled the dreams ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: They Are All Heartless
haha this was cool. i just picked up a few mistakes and awkward-sounding sentences. They all start walking towards the tall house, every single one of them limping. Not one ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Knights of Dawn Prolouge/Pilot
"Let her go!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. It did not reply only stared straight into my eyes a s he first it was an it, now ...
Mar 21, 2010
