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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Timeless Masquerade

    hi i really liked this but... Let's get amnesia. i think you could get rid of that fullstop And go back in time To where ballroom dances Filled the dreams ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: They Are All Heartless

    haha this was cool. i just picked up a few mistakes and awkward-sounding sentences. They all start walking towards the tall house, every single one of them limping. Not one ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Knights of Dawn Prolouge/Pilot

    "Let her go!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. It did not reply only stared straight into my eyes a s he first it was an it, now ...

    Mar 21, 2010


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