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awww this was really nice and sweet. Triggered by your words, That I deserve to hear when i read this line, all i thought was why does this person deserve ...

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This is a sequel to one of my other posts, The Last Hunt. It's not finished, but anyway... Golden Boy In the darkest, most obscured part of the busy night ...

wooo! go horror stories! jackle here as requested. i really liked this, i've always been a sucker for the zombie stuff. i agree with everything the previous reviewers said, especially ...

hi this seems like a good start! I screamed, and he covered my mouth with his grubby, dirty hand grubby and dirty mean basically the same thing and using them ...

The Prevailing Darkness Preface Black... so black... Stale air is trapped in my lungs, I refuse to release it. One sound and They’ll find me. One sound and I’m dead. ...

hi thanks for all your help! :D will edit it when i find the time In general, I did like this, but it seems unfinished. I would love to read ...

Hello could you please reveiw the first chapter of my novel, Darkest Moments? pretty please? -Jackle

The Last Hunt In the rain washed streets of LA, Kammal Bradie leaned against a street lamp in a pool of light, puffing on a cigarette. The night sky was ...

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I am not a good person, but at least I’m not you. haha i love this line. the whole thing was pretty good but you could spice it up a ...

Ok... there's not a lot of material here. Is this a whole chapter? because it's a little short and uneventful. first chapters should hook the reader, and this just didn't. ...