jackle

Could you please review this? Pretty please? :)

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The buzzing throng of students moved at a sluggish pace through the main gate as the afternoon sun baked their faces. Jason had been on-edge all day, constantly keeping his ...

Forest Lake State High School. The sign loomed above, casting a dark shadow upon Jason’s pale face in the brilliance of the Australian sunlight. His vivid blue eyes flicked about ...

I woke, after more nightmares, in a state of tiredness greater than that which I was in before sleeping. The pillow beneath me was heavenly soft, and as I eased ...

hahahaha good description, the characters are really realistic, and i like that its about homosexuals because I feel like society is just sweeping them under the rug for no one ...

whoa this is pretty cool my suggestion, which probably isnt a good one since i quit art ages ago, is to do the face area in a darker, thicker pencil ...

wow this was really good, what a clever way to describe the sun! it was fantastic imagery, great work! it was really deep if one dares to look below the ...

My novel, The Prevailing Darkness, would like a reveiw :wink: A review on any of the chapters would be fine, but currently chapter three and six have no reviews, sooo ...

This text goes out to Bree and her family for their recent loss. R.I.P li’l Nathan. Send this

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Dead ants. That’s what my front garden smelt like. Just dead ants and dry soil. Russell’s pale, green jeep was parked on the dirt driveway, the driver’s side door hanging ...

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Mum and Russell were screaming themselves hoarse when I got in. I tried not to notice as I shuffled to my bedroom, but then a crack split the yelling, and ...