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jackhinks

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Smoke Break

    I, for one, thought the level of description was very appropriate for the piece. It left no questions as to the condition of the setting. Gross bathroom, got it! Well ...

    Oct 2, 2005
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Romantic Fiction: A Fine Romance

    You were getting into the beginning well and did a really, really good job setting the scene. You had the feel of the diner down SO well. That's probably my ...

    Oct 2, 2005


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins