jackhinks

Shark He's part of a world of smoke, of black linoleum of green felt table tops. He's all at once the hiss and click of balls colliding and the smooth ...

I, for one, thought the level of description was very appropriate for the piece. It left no questions as to the condition of the setting. Gross bathroom, got it! Well ...

You were getting into the beginning well and did a really, really good job setting the scene. You had the feel of the diner down SO well. That's probably my ...