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Sorry for my frustration. Save the newbie. And remember, if you're going to critique this work, please keep in mind that this is (my attempted) in iambic pentameter. I don't ...

NO REPLIES!?! You guys are ruining my self-esteem!

What would Shakespeare say about this? "Was there ever any man thus beaten out of season, when in the why and the wherefore is neither rhyme nor reason?" ("Comedy of ...

I'm in love with the tactile imagery throughout your poem, especially here: "he slips / his whip down my throat, / lashing the inside of my mouth. / The Reaper ...

This is my first posted work. It's on the longer side, but it's sweet. Please tell me that this makes you laugh. (Or not.) * * * "A Journey to ...

I agree that the characterizations of Rosa and Josie don't seem realistic. The only thing that is convincing the reader that they're little children is that they address their parents ...