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Boys and girls hop on the streets under the nine o’clock moon in the warm city night, howling and whooping into the drafty venue with LED lights and a disco ...

love and wove don't rhyme It's a visual rhyme. Shakespeare used it. It does the same job as a regular rhyme.

Moved from Other Fiction. Any critiques? ---- Super Champion Funzone I almost felt the needle pinching into my arm, filling me up with sweet delicacies, chilling my veins like liquid ...

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I think this chapter is well structured. You did a good job creating a tense atmosphere in the first part. Taylor and her Anglo-Germanic-Spanish hybrid mumblings are hilarious! Taylor was ...

Wow. I think its the imagery that really makes this poem stand out. The eyes the speaker is describing is majestic and intimidating at the same time. Bittersweet, the weight ...

Hey nice job! This one nicely captures the optimism and uncertainty of love, and it deserves a thorough edit: It starts with a smile Then grows to a kiss , ...

Hey Moon, I thought it was really good. It's really optimistic and cheery. Even when as it gets sadder at the end, the optimism is still there, as if she'll ...

Writing this was tough. Warning: naughty language and references to illegal substances (teens deal with this stuff in real life anyways). ----- Final Year of Solitude Part 2 - October ...

Nice story you have going on in here, I can't wait for the next part! Here is my critique (aren't you lucky?): I hate our twenty-something-year-old , too happy math ...

Wow, this is emotionally intense. This is probably the best "lament for one's lost love" poem I've ever read. You have good style and your imagery is good, but there's ...

Wow, this is really great. I'm a sucker for love and romance, so I might be biased when I say that I like this poem. But I think you should ...

I personally enjoy short, simple poems. This one is pretty straight forward, but it does have the potential to be more. If you wish, you may consider extending it and ...

This is the first part of the Final Year of Solitude series. Part 1 is more like a prologue, the plot doesn't really begin until part 2, this just introduces ...

This isn't my art; I recently discovered a clothing line called "Ruby Republic." I was like, "Dang, these shirts are cute." The style is a little bohemian, the designer is ...