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I have no clue what I'm doing or if it works or if it's garbage. I hate rating this rated R, because I've been thinking like this and talking like ...

Hey TenYo, I really liked this piece. Before I start talking about it, let me first show you some things that you should take a second look at, which will ...

Nice, I enjoyed the rhythm of this one. The short, brisk lines work well with this topic, I feel. One thing though: "Who knows what happens when we die, Do ...

Ha ha, I like this poem, especially its ending. Personally, I'm not a poetic guy, so I don't think you'll find my critique on rhythm or meter reliable. So instead, ...

Interesting. . . . I'm curious about how this will turn out.

Yeah, it is pretty random. But this does remind me of Poe's "Raven".

The Truth I run outside and drop to my knees, Hands trembling in the sky, crying, “Please, God, please!” Mom’s got two jobs and two kids, Trying to feed us ...

What do you peeps think about some kind of poetry reciting night. Everyone grab a webcam, read some poetry and post them online. Not for us to crit, but to ...

She wants to run away from it all, but she still hits trees because she doesn't know where she's going with life. She wants independence; growing up means more responsibilities ...

Hey, beemarie425! Welcome to YMS. You know, most people on this site are going to be like, "I don't like the way you formatted this poem. Can you make all ...

Hola amigo, let me take a peeksy at what you got here. Alright, first, here's the itty gritty: Shall we run away, in to the distance? Take out the comma. ...

Dude, don't force your writing to submit. Instead, you must submit to your writing.

I like how you make us read it. We read down instead from left to right. The words and your eyes fall down the page along with the imagery of ...

Hey WaterVyper, welcome to YMS. I see that this is your first work here, and I have to admit, it's pretty good. Here are some technical mistakes that I corrected: ...

He hasn’t been home in so long, this town paved with broken promises and dreams long dead and gone. He got a text from Ken, there’s a party at tenth. ...