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Re: CSI: Seattle
Hi! I'm Jessica and I'd like to say first of all that I really liked it. Just so you know, guys, I'm not that good at writing but I decided ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Choke
Hiya! This is Jessica here. Overall, it was a good song. It sounds almost like it could be a Paramore song, and I like Paramore a lot. YAY! It does! ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Automatically in Love: Bill Kaulitz Fantasy Ch. 2
Hey! I'm Jessica and i will be reviewing this today! I haven't read the first chapter yet, btw > Show not tell Comments and corrections are in red BZZ.BZZZZ. "What ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Mirror (4)
Howdy! It's Jessica, here on request! First of all I thought it was phenomenal! : D You definitely had me hooked from the beginning. > I would have liked to ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Looking for good books (preferably vampire)
The " Maximum Ride" Series By James Patterson Is Spectacular. "The Saga Of Darren Shan" ( A.K.A. Cirque Du Freak Series ) Is Very Good, And So Is The Movie, ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Operation Frostbite: Death at Sea
Howdy! I'm Jessica and I'm reviewing Death At Sea today. : ) First of all, I think that it's pretty good and you're a wonderful writer yourself. Though, I did ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Annie
Hi! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! Here are some of my points - Show don't tell! - Be sure to do spell checks before you ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: The God Conspiracy - Preface and Chapter One
Hi! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today. First of all, I really liked the whole thing! I really hope to read more soon! It was only ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Watchers Book One: Counting Stars - Prologue (edited)
Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing this piece today! Overall, I thought it was okay. You have an interesting style of writing. The story could go ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The Fallen Angel:Prologue
Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this piece today. By the way, welcome to the YWS! Hope you enjoy your time here. First of all, I liked ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Lyric (I don't have a title so...)
Hello! I am Jessica and here to review this story as asked! First of all, I liked it a lot. I think you are a very wonderful writer! Where are ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Blackout Forever -- Chp. 1-Part 1
Hello! I am Jessica and here to review Blackout Forever today! First of all, I thought the plot was really good. The story has a lot of potential and i ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Bluelight: Chapter 1
Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! Okay, there is a bunch for me to work with but not much i have to say. I ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11
Okay! I thought you sounded almost like Max but It sounded a little bit that you were trying a bit to hard to sound like Max. It made it a ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Prologue/Chapter 1
Hello! Welcome to YWS! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! First of all, I really think the story has potential! I think your writing could be ...
Jul 12, 2010