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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Mother's Love

    Wow, this is incredible. I think it's really good to address this form of alcoholism. It was heart wrenching and the end was unexpected. The description was good as well, ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Just my kind of luck

    Thank you :D

    Jun 7, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Just my kind of luck

    Thank you. I was planning to leave it as a stand alone but I might expand more as I've gotten some more ideas.

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Just my kind of luck

    When I started it, I was planning it to be more of a short story but I'll consider adding more to the story. Thank you. :)

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Just my kind of luck

    Thank you for correcting my grammatical errors

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: To the Other Half of My Heart

    Hi. Incredible work! I love how you addressed different parts of one relationship as well as your relationship with family and friends. The letter is very heart-felt and real. How ...

    May 28, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Door of Grief

    The descriptions are incredible. I could really picture the scene in my head. Well Done!

    May 28, 2020


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