ivanmarrero0211

After so many months, the evening walk was an everyday routine, an invariably wander in the streets of the neighborhood and nearby parks. The custom traces itineraries. Thus, although one ...

Very good for such a young writer as you are.

I liked it. Although the events are rather abrupt, you’ve made a solid character, who won’t cry about her mom’s death in the entire selection.

This is a strategically well-detailed poem. I like how you appeal to the emotions of an empathetic reader. The ending was G-R-E-A-T. A question always leaves an inquiry after you ...

Great. I am a fan of purple too :D. Just one detail, I'd have liked if you had been more explanatory about the emotions.

A poem that overflows tenderness.

Very good. is it intended to be for Halloween? :D You have a very accurate concept of how horror should be written. Somehow, it took me back to those nights ...

Very nice. Hopefully, we'll get to read you book.

It’s a terrific delineation of the pleasures of dancing. The title is a pretty good grabber (personal experience). ;)

My 13-year-old cousin loved it and so did I. Congratulations.

Thank you. I’m a new writer and I truly value your advice. :)

Very good prologue. Good luck with the rest. :)

Excellent unambiguousness of the experiences.

It’s very nice indeed. Although, I collide with the other’s reviewer’s opinions: the last part was somewhat adventitious. Precise use of words. :)

The poet, walking slowly under the thin rain, climbed the rocky road that led up the cliff. He was mentally reviewing his life, hoping to find some joy, but the ...