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Re: but ended up alright.
Thanks for the feedback. It was actually refreshing, and one of the reasons I posted it: to get honest reviews from people who actually care about writing in general. I'm ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: what is it like to disappear?
It's surprising. I liked the familiar stanzas and even more the story they contained. I almost wanted the poem to continue. keep it up.
Jun 24, 2015