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Re: A Girl Dies in Boston
The emotion this poem had to it is great, but I think you shoul either add more rhythm to it, or take out the rhyme. Otherwise, it's great.
Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:49 am
The emotion this poem had to it is great, but I think you shoul either add more rhythm to it, or take out the rhyme. Otherwise, it's great.
Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:49 am