itsjustemilie

enjoyed reading this poem, its sad but interesting a very well written poem well done happy writing

love the idea, some lines could do with a touchup but an overall great job well done. happy writing

Great poem love your style! happy writing

I like it, its well written and straight to the point. :) happywriting

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thanks guys. I'm terrible at laying out poems, and grammar and spelling :) I really Appreciate the feedback

You are nothing but a fairytale Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble, As your caracter ...