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Hey Flower, All your other reviewers have nitpicked for me i don't feel its necessary to repeat what they have already pointed out. So I'll just jump right to the ...

Hi, if you will, I have a piece of dramatic poetry, thats lonely without reviews :) it would be lovely to have some feedback

Hi :) if you will, I would love reviews on my new poem

My mouth fell Did those words just leave his lips? A man with such beauty Such pride Swallow substances to stay alive Will Bright eyes once filled with hope, Stay ...

This is a very interesting poem. You really got your point across to the reader. The imagery you used throughout the poem is wonderful. You certainly have some good poetry ...

“As the car sped along the almost empty highway, it rushed towards a center point around which extraordinary and chilling events would begin unfolding in less than two hours. These ...

Hi, I'm fairly new to YWS and i always find that i am needing more points and reviews. I am willing to review people's work honestly and I will review ...

thanks for the review, I Haven't actually finished the story i was just giving the basic concept so i can get reviews on whether i should stick with the story ...

re-read this bit of work, and didn't like it.

Sweet, Your story is kind of like the ceremony's that you where telling me about. I love the second half of the story, the whole idea is creepy but interesting ...

Sweet, Your story is kind of like the ceremony's that you where telling me about. I love the second half of the story, the whole idea is creepy but interesting ...

Thanks guys, Revised it a bit. I'm not going to spend to much time on this poem however. It was pretty much just a quick poem i wrote when i ...

Revised the poem a bit, Didn't spend much time on the revision though. I'm not so into this poem, it was more of a spare of the moment poem out ...

Words from hate, slowly slide Pensive lips, this cant be right Guilty stares hold you tight Fighting will Please be alright Hold my hand, don’t let go I need you ...

these are absolutely beautiful. You really captured a moment of natures true beauty in these photo's. I think the first one is my favorite the orange color tones are beautiful ...