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Re: Holding the Sun - chapter 2
The gravel crunched under the tires as Angela and I made our way down the old road. We could hear them before we could see them. Them being the usual ...
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Re: The Forever Summer
I will keep this short and sweet! Unlike Nike, I think the first paragraph was perfect! It was a little wordy, perhaps, but I think since you only had this ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Hi, Everyone!
Hey there! I am new to YWS and I am trying to get my baring for now. I have done two reviews and submitted one short work but I am ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Drive
Wow, I'm impressed with how well written this is! It flows nicely and logically and you can tell you really have a connection with your subject. I'm assuming you play ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Our Room
This was so well written! I felt like I was sitting at Barns & Noble, not YWS! =) Well done! It definitely is interesting enough to make the reader want ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Holding The Sun - chapter 1
Other than tons (and tons) of essays, I haven't really tried my hand at fictional writing before so here's my first shot! I'm not the greatest at proof reading my ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: A Nursery In Paris, 1783
I was impressed! Especially considering you are so young yet! You definitely have a talent. I found your story enjoyable and it flowed smoothly. There were a few sentences that ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Amber
Ok, so I have to admit. I am not one much for poetry. That being said, I'm not sure how helpful my comment will be, but it feels good to ...
Aug 3, 2010
