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  • Romantic Novels Re: Holding the Sun - chapter 2

    The gravel crunched under the tires as Angela and I made our way down the old road. We could hear them before we could see them. Them being the usual ...

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Forever Summer

    I will keep this short and sweet! Unlike Nike, I think the first paragraph was perfect! It was a little wordy, perhaps, but I think since you only had this ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, Everyone!

    Hey there! I am new to YWS and I am trying to get my baring for now. I have done two reviews and submitted one short work but I am ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Drive

    Wow, I'm impressed with how well written this is! It flows nicely and logically and you can tell you really have a connection with your subject. I'm assuming you play ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Our Room

    This was so well written! I felt like I was sitting at Barns & Noble, not YWS! =) Well done! It definitely is interesting enough to make the reader want ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Holding The Sun - chapter 1

    Other than tons (and tons) of essays, I haven't really tried my hand at fictional writing before so here's my first shot! I'm not the greatest at proof reading my ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: A Nursery In Paris, 1783

    I was impressed! Especially considering you are so young yet! You definitely have a talent. I found your story enjoyable and it flowed smoothly. There were a few sentences that ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Amber

    Ok, so I have to admit. I am not one much for poetry. That being said, I'm not sure how helpful my comment will be, but it feels good to ...

    Aug 3, 2010


Anne felt that life was really not worth living without puffed sleeves.
— L. M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables