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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Let's Go Home

    Thank you so much! I was intending this to be short and just to show a small moment of pain (I wrote this in school fairly quickly) and I will ...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Let's Go Home

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I wrote this fairly quickly (I was in school when I wrote this), and I didn't have the time to make it more ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Let's Go Home

    Thank you so much! This was my first piece of writing, so I'm really happy someone likes it!

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Let's Go Home

    Thank you for reviewing! I've seen the "mile a minute" thing used in books, so I thought I might use it here //^^ And I did mean it to be ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Let's Go Home

    Thank you so much for reviewing! This was my first story, and I appreciate the feedback! :D

    Mar 11, 2015


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree