irnbru666

I think this story could be elongated by changing the approach, perhaps inserting a kind of lead up of events to being hit by car, because all the drama is ...

Overall, for me, what has been flagged up is that I must, must must make things more obvious and consider my poor confused audience :( The daughter was supposed to ...

Thanks alot for the critique on my Bridget piece :D I appreciate that you pointed out all my grammatical errors because I wouldn't have noticed them, and I know I ...

I totally agree wth you =D I think Sex and the City is even more addictive than chocolate (if that's possible) and I think your mini review captures the magic ...

:D I'm just not used to this yet, thanks for helping me out. I've posted it somewhere else already though, i'll see what happens :?

Thanks for replying, I wasn't really sure what forum to post in. I don't know if I should post it again in another one :?