irishnavygirl

It is deep. However, I failed to see the point of mentioning the sweatshirt. It made me think deeper, but I still found no point. That's just me.

Very touching. You made a valid point that not many people think about and realize. Great job!

Okay... this poem had potential, but you described one dress then described another. It seemed very choppy and all over the place. Try to keep it less kryptic though.

How can I love you When you have caused so many tears to run down my cheeks? How can I love you When these tears are not tears of joy, ...

My love can be but a sand castle, A mighty fortress in appearance, But a decrepit heap of sand thrown about by the sea. That amour that once existed is ...

[i][b]This omen of truth that ligures within me has become a ponderous lade, derived from the depths of my soul. The lenient hand from my maker beckons me forth with ...

It's a great poem, but it just kind of stopped. You could really go in depth and really help us feel the anger; you know? After all, some of the ...

I liked it a lot. However, I think you should go a little more in depth with your feelings and provide more imagery and posibly some metaphors. And do go ...

[pre]I look at my reflection in the mirror and it weeps though I do not. The skys are dark and the weather dreary, though I am all alone, nearly having ...

[pre]I look at my reflection in the mirror and it weeps though I do not. The skys are dark and the weather dreary, though I am all alone, nearly having ...

I really enjoyed the poem. Sometimes things aren't meant to make sense; especially at two am. However, this was really well thought out and I liked it a lot!!!

This was an amazing poem! It grabbed my attention right away, and I immediately understood and related. Well done!