irishdancer27

That was really, really beautiful. I like your use of imagery and personification. Bravo!

Once upon a time, there was a woman, and she was brushing her long black curls. Oh--and humming. She was humming so loudly, and so badly I might add, that ...

The words looked magical upon the glossy page, Filled with enchantment and adventure and indescribable wonder. With a careful touch she stroked them, For they were her own. She’d been ...

I kind of like this poem. It makes me feel happy, which I can tell is the emotion you are trying to invoke. Its simple, but nice. I can't wait ...