ire123

i really enjoyed reading your short story.i think you used vivid details and at no point in the story t was vague to me.i also noticed how well the vocabulary ...

so then i told him no way ill ever g out with a jerk like...and besides im a chick thankyou very much.

i wanted to expess how much i think of your peice...i like how you used the simple game of chess to express what was really going on with the character.there ...

wow this really is a great read.your writing is amazing,and i hope to read more of this story.i expecially loved the way you started of the story...i usually start mine ...

i really really like this song.....really

thnks alot

my name is ire and im 16 years of my spare time i enjoy writing(duh.lol)and drawing anime....i plan to make a anime of my own oneday...but i also enjoy writing ...

yup youll definantly fit in here...and did you seriously finish a book...cause i havent even come close(?)ohhh curious question do you like anime cause the avatar you have looks like ...

hmmmm...mabye writers block??????i think what would help is talking a short walk observing the things around you...itll help by you not stressing over thinking of something great in a short ...

the impression of being crippled by the coldness of their gaze the innocence of her gestures their words become a blaze athousand tears like crystals left her brown doeish eyes ...

i have a bad tendency to find inspiration then write a stroy im in love with then lose intrest in what im writing then i throw it dow and loose ...

it was far too late for me to make any more apoligies, and i had made 3 phone calls too many. i retained an unsettling feeling in the pit of ...

hello my name is ireana and ill try to keep this greeting short and sweet until my real writings 16 years old an aspiring novelist i find myself good enough ...