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@Laure

@megsug

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Could you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happenings?

its nice to know theres someone out there in which i can relate to, because i was kinda feeling like i was alone..lol if you want i would like to ...

i really really ...really enjoyed reading this although i wish i could heard what it sounded like...other than that i think that it was pretty awsome and very detailed.

haha...i really enjoyed that .you got that off of spongebob didnt you, but anyways ill be singing this everytime i log in to yws now.

tell you the truth i kinda didnt take my time on this so i wasnt really noticing /worrying about the puncuation and stuff..but im glad you liked it.

well i am done with all my waiting for come around so im quitting cause losing no...fun i cant keep on sitting around and i keep beleiving you find out.. ...

i really liked this peice you wrote.i think that you used alot of details which made the story vague in no way.hope to hear more of this story because its ...

all i can say is that i love how you began the story with the foreword..overall your story was well written and not vague at any point.i love the characters ...