inyourdirtiestpants

alexisonfire avril lavinge audioslave i wish i would never have to hear those 'bands' again.

Kelly's amazing. Her voice is out of this world.

beautifully dark. your imagery is excellent.

What I See: I quicken my pace to leave this place quicker -to leave this place sooner? maybe. Using quick again is frustrating to the reader. -Sometimes you use capitals ...

heeey. i'm new too. i just thought i would say hello. :)

they're all very beautiful.

Hey you Green Day Lovers there is something I need explained. I heard that they hate America. I mean I am sure that they are good singers and good musicians, ...

lemonade

What I See: line 11: you should be your line 13: should there be a period at the end? How I Feel: I liked this poem. The sadness is conveyed ...

Good poetry; teen angst is overrated. By the way, it should be yours, not your's. oooh, thanks for catching that typo. i'll fix it up right away.

well, thanks for the early birthday wishes and all your kind words. :D nope, its not snowing up here quite yet. not until November probably. that's the most usual time, ...

please, take out my heart, and replace it with an empty chest cavity. i would rather not feel anything at all, than torment of a heartless lust. like skeleton fingers, ...

i'm ashley from ontario, canada. my login in [inyourdirtiestpants] comes from song lyrics: "kiss me in the morning in your dirtiest pants" by a silver mt zion. next to writing ...

bands i worship would have to be: -jimmy eat world -american football -bright eyes -a silver mt zion