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Re: Soul
This is ok but I think you should take out hazel from the first line, I think it would flow better. Your deep [s]hazel[/s] green eyes are watching every move ...
Dec 1, 2006 -
Re: You've gone away
I liked this, carelessaussie13 is right it's full of emotion. The bit(s) I really liked was "Cry alone, you've gone away, No more nights, some much pain" Where did you ...
Dec 1, 2006 -
Re: Gone with the Wind
yeah I do like this
Dec 1, 2006