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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Suburban Mythology

    Suburban Mythology She wasn't born in the sea as other goddesses were, but she did grow up near one. Unlike Helen of Troy, no wars were fought over her, but ...

    Feb 10, 2008
  • Other Re: The Frabric of Enlightenment

    I love the poetic nature of this, but I do agree that it might be a bit much. Your sentences are choc-full of description and I do like your word ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mindstorm

    Hi all, this is my first submission here, and I hope you like it. I didn't really know what genre this (and most of the other things I write) belongs ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Moment out of time

    Excellent imagery. I love your style as well. It's like "poetic prose". It invoked some intense emotions in me [as good writing should].

    Jan 25, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Midnight

    Overall, I liked it. Throughout reading it, I couldn't help but think of a more defined direction for it to head: a metaphoric comparison between the awesome beauty of the ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Al Gore's Nobel Prize

    Haha. Very nice. I love political satire, and this one really had me going. “In this day and age, freedom of speech is being more and more infringed upon... It’s ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: You Gonna Eat That?

    I like the contrast of it all. Serious with a hint of tension in the air, all the way up until the last sentence. Nice. Humor really is an excellent ...

    Jan 25, 2008


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings