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Re: The Unthinkable
Ok, I don't have much critique for this, since it was so short. All I can really say is that I'm curious to see where this goes. I'm introvert by ...
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: Purple Winter Coat
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Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: The Basketball Court
Well, I like the main idea of the story, though you definitely have some things to work on. First of all, it is all one paragraph. It became harder and ...
Sep 5, 2007