intheblowinwind

This is good. It is a very good metaphor. Although I don't know about suffocating. Empty seems a little more accurate. But, good writing and powerful imagery, especially "felt the ...

I don't really like it. The quirkiness you are going for doesn't seem real. The flow of the poem seems manufactured. It is contrived and confusing. It seems like you ...

This isn't very good. I don't feel that all of these relate to lies. It seems like you are forcing imagery that doesn't really work with your topic.

I like it. It is a silly poem that actually rings completely true. We all love M&M's. I like the rhyming. It almost never seems forced. Except for rhyming wide ...

These books are amazing. The creativity and breadth of the story is wonderful, and his themes are powerful and important. Pullman's writing style is excellent as well.