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  • Lyrics Re: Before This Summer Ends

    This was a spectactular read, however I found a few errors that I would like to point to you. The imager is fanatastic I felt as if I were in ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Welcome to Hell

    This is a great poem definitely keep up the superb work. I only have one suggestion change to where it hurts the most to the most sensitive areas of the ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Forbidden Fruit

    The imagery in this poem is great however it is a bit unclear what the point of the poem is?

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Running Away

    Running Away Running away to find a place of Unity, where all are accepted for who they are, where No judgment is passed on anyone, Never to be hurt again ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello everyone my name is Eric and I am new here

    Hello to everyone, My name is Eric, I am a twenty-five year old male. I was in the Navy for four years. I have been all over the world. I ...

    Feb 14, 2011


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