inspirus

“I read Shelley, Verne, Dickinson, Dickens, Bronte sisters, Austin, Tennyson, Augustine, Kipling, Poe, Shakespeare, Sarah Williams—Ho—” “Some would say that you have an exquisite taste for c

The most intriguing chapter of them all. You had a faltering start though with a few grammar, omission and logical mistakes, which is typical of a long narrative. Proofread your ...

A remarkable improvement from the first chapters. :) I need not add to the sound advice that has been poured to you by some venerated reviewers. Anyway, please allow me ...

I loved the second chapter. I went through it quickly and that means that the flow is great. Dialogue seems to be your strength. Anyway, while its often prudent to ...

A lovely start. Try to be more descriptive though. I like the humour that you slipped into the story. It really brightens up the follow up. Anyway, try to use ...