inprisonforsparkling

Thanks so much for your review!!! Really sorry for the late reply, I was abroad and then very jetlagged, so I had zero energy. I think the transitions feeling that ...

Thanks so much for your review!! The vagueness of his past is very definitely on purpose at this point, haha. Part of the reason the scenes aren't flowing into each ...

Thank you so so much for this, it's so detailed

Hi!! Thanks very much! I%u2019ve looked into the hero%u2019s journey before, and I have the story planned out, so no worries there!

Agh can't believe I missed this!!!! Thank you so much!!

Hi Avian, thank you so much for this review!! I'm really glad you liked it :D I hadn't thought about the nicknames, you might be right? Though I imagine over ...

Oh my gosh thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed, I'm really having a blast writing. Thank you for such a kind and detailed review, it made my ...

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed! You're right, it does escalate quickly at the moment. I'll definitely edit it in a second draft (if I ever get ...

Thank you for the review!!! I'm definitely going to put a bit more work into the first and second scene in future drafts; like you said I want to describe ...

Hi!! Thank you for the review!! Yeah, I'm definitely going to flesh out that sequence when I get the chance. I'm glad you like the characters/dynamics! I'll also flesh out ...

Thank you!! It's definitely more YA than children's though haha.

Hi!! Thank you for the review! As to Jun, probably she'll show up in flashbacks and stuff? I don't have many plans for her I'll be honest ahaha. Though I ...

Thank you so much for the review!! Yeah, I think in future drafts I'm definitely going to expand on the first part. On Ilya being a source of information: He's ...