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  • Other Poetry Re: Storm

    This is a beautiful picture but one question: [/quote]Let it move up in the stream [quote] What are you trying to say/ show us? I got stuck on the fact ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: thinking back for forward

    A thouhgt occured and persisted "In Germany, what is World War Two?" is it right or wrong, is it glory or is it shame, is it taught or hid? I ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Operation: Snow Cone

    loved this :D at the end was the point of view changed? i know that it changed from humans to the penguins. did it go from penguins to puffins? some ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Co-operate and Live, or Disobay and Die

    you idea is great but like Heidigirl666 said you basically need more research. my favorite part of history is the Holocaust so i like reading about it. “The Gestapo made ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Far Off

    Far Off far off in the distance a little tiny farm... a windmill, a barn, a farmhouse in a peaceful, dismal fog okay bear with me this poem is discription ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Who Do you want to be?

    Just stop and think of how life's fair. either you need to stop this line right after 'stop' or put in a comma to add emphasis but it didn't have ...

    Mar 28, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Drops of fire

    i like your poem though it raises many questions foremost in my mind is: why is this happening? i know that this question is sometimes impossible to answer, but i ...

    Mar 28, 2008


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