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Re: Storm
This is a beautiful picture but one question: [/quote]Let it move up in the stream [quote] What are you trying to say/ show us? I got stuck on the fact ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: thinking back for forward
A thouhgt occured and persisted "In Germany, what is World War Two?" is it right or wrong, is it glory or is it shame, is it taught or hid? I ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Operation: Snow Cone
loved this :D at the end was the point of view changed? i know that it changed from humans to the penguins. did it go from penguins to puffins? some ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Co-operate and Live, or Disobay and Die
you idea is great but like Heidigirl666 said you basically need more research. my favorite part of history is the Holocaust so i like reading about it. “The Gestapo made ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Far Off
Far Off far off in the distance a little tiny farm... a windmill, a barn, a farmhouse in a peaceful, dismal fog okay bear with me this poem is discription ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Who Do you want to be?
Just stop and think of how life's fair. either you need to stop this line right after 'stop' or put in a comma to add emphasis but it didn't have ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Drops of fire
i like your poem though it raises many questions foremost in my mind is: why is this happening? i know that this question is sometimes impossible to answer, but i ...
Mar 28, 2008
