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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Better Hell

    This was.... was sad, creepy, and fairly good. However, take a look at your meter. It's something like: 5,5,6,2,6,8,5,7..... well, it's not smooth to say the least. Work on this! ...

    Jan 29, 2010


"would you still love me if i was a worm" yeah babe i would AND id get you your own compost bin so we could enter gardening competitions together
— Corvid