inkwell

I really enjoyed reading your poem! Good use of allusions and parallel structure. :D Needs some improvement in punctuation but I think you know that. The title is interesting but ...

I really like this poem! What I enjoy is trying to figure out what you could be describing. Good personificatoin of whatever it is though! :D Need a space after ...

Cool analysis of a very analysis-worthy speech! I personally love the speech as well and had to analyze it in English this year. He was a great president.

Thanks Matt for the positive feedback! I purposely made short lines so I could challenge my self to make the most out of limited word count. Maybe I will have ...

Thanks for the feedback everyone! :) Hi inkwell! Are you new to YWS? If so, welcome! This was very good! I agree with Matt Bellamy. You have a fantastic word ...

Almost a good thing. I'm hoping now the I can check out the other things he's written but never published. A legend though who wont be forgot. R.I.P. P.S. I've ...

You get what you pay for at BK. I'm not going to crit, this by the way. Seeing as it's a joke. Unless you were really trying for some satire ...

I love the way you’re out of this world A wise man, twisting theories in your mind I love the way your eyes twinkle When you turn into a reckless ...

Dear Classy, "This was the biggest problem in your story. You introduce too many chapters for your first chapter, if this is what it is." Typo? :P Nice call on ...

Hiya Inkwell! You know, I never seemed to mention how much I love your avatar. Brian is totally the best thing since pancakes. So, anyway, on to the review. I ...

Enthralling! The beginning was pure tranquility and then, "it leapt"! Your dramatic change in tone was very well timed and kept me interested. I also appreciate your refrain from dialogue ...

Glistening eyes and bemused glances, Are small clues toward my hidden secret. You had your fair shake, but missed the threshold, To memories that could have been. I like this ...

Marmalade ---------------------------- Marmalade: Sweet citrus Soaked in, And full of, Subtle flavors - Of chromatic love. Sustained happiness, Relished Alongside, Bitter skin, Peeled away And sliced

Purple Honey ------------------------------------------------ Fuzzy spirals of purple honey, Spinning and spilling down. Stuck to our faces, Sticky and sweet, Sliding on my lips, Glued to our feet. Re

Your poem was good. I feel your situation. The only thing that keeps the knife at bay is the animal instinct to preserve ourselves. So I'm an Epicurean at heart.