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Revised the story with both of your criticisms in mind and an extra spelling/grammar sweep. :)

Inspired by D.B. The Secret Goldfish She kissed his forehead and swept his bangs to the side. "You know I love you, right?" Dylan was hesitant. He glanced at the ...

The funny thing is, all I had to do is read the title and I understood what you meant completely. Despite that it's hard to offer advice. I think what ...

Conceptually creative. The metaphorical fishbowl head speaks volumes. Cool picture!

Psychologically pitch perfect. I absolutely loved your approach. It felt as if you wrote this brilliant prose and then poetically enhanced it. It was artistic in every sense. Thank you ...

i'm guessing you really like marmalade? haha personally i can't stand the stuff, but if you're willing to write about it, i'm willing to read about it. so at first ...

Judging by your avatar, I'm going to assume this poem is inspired by the latest Alice movie. I haven't seen it yet so I wont be able to really take ...

Excellent poem! It is very well written with great scheme. While reading it I could feel the warmth and chills that you provoked. Third stanza is my favorite. :)

Wicked portrait! Fabulous in so many ways! Don't change it. :)

This still needs some work, so tear it apart. Nature of Man To take something from someone that they love so much, I would remove the comma here, no need ...

A very random poem. Let me elaborate: Random? The whole poem is a response to the proposition, If I could be paper And my blood could be ink And my ...

This is a slightly dated poem in which the words weren't my priority but more so a careful use of repetition and an intense rhyme scheme/meter. Don't be afraid to ...

A/N: Another experimentation. I'm not quite sure it was successful but it definitely challenged my way of looking at poetry. (Title is subject to change) - My aim was to ...

Everyone else pretty much said any good criticism that I could've. Excellent first poem! Work on your vocab too, if need be a thesaurus is a great tool. Most of ...

Interesting poem! The philosophical themes are great. I've studied the philosophy of art and beauty and I like the way you question what art is so purely. I've also been ...