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To be honest I felt a certain lack of ingenuity in the poem. I didn't feel a connection from the writer to what was written. Besides that it was a ...

What Apple said, welcome to YWS!

Terrifically beautiful poem Holly! The days are paper-thin. Gauzy, insubstantial fabric, slipping from my fingers on a windy day. I watch them float away, twisting about softly as they climb ...

Welcome to YWS! Always great to see new writers here. For starters I have to say that your poem is very saddening. Mostly because your description of the potato was ...

Wayfarer ---------------------------------- Black veils over glassy eyes - my wayfarer is the perfect disguise for a classy kid to party. It hides the empty stomach - food for thought. Not ...

I love you painting! It looks like you really enjoyed it and I hope your proud of it because it came out really nice. I've never seen this specific Monet ...

Why on Earth would you attempt such a ballsy thing, Lord Anzius? :p You cannot quantify supernatural entities. If that were true, then the scientific community would be able to ...

Laughed the whole way through! On the dot hilarity.

Oh my god! This is a breathtaking poem. Your story telling is top notch. The anonymous drunken couple kept me so entertained. Your daring depiction of the events that took ...

I love the way you shaded her and the way you properly posed her face in a unique and expressive way. Ditto on the printer paper and clearer picture. Keep ...

Terrific poetry! Something fresh indeed, a dark twist on a love poem. Please excuse me I'm going to try out a new format for reviewing your poem. :wink: + I ...

Well I was inspired mostly by wine tasting as an art form and I wanted to poetically describe my experience. The first stanza was describing the wine being poured, the ...

I absolutely fell in love with your style and skill! Are you going to post a drawing of Pon that isn't an X-ray?

A/N: I wrote almost 50 haiku/haikus/haiki during my trip to Thailand, and these are some of my favourites. As you can probably see, a lot of them are strongly inspired ...

This is just a rough poem and I decided to get some critique before moving on with it. I hope you like it. Imbibe ------------------------------ Scarlet waterfall cascades. Ricochet - ...